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The Call of Cthulhu - Pages 16 - 17 by DrFaustusAU The Call of Cthulhu - Pages 16 - 17 by DrFaustusAU
H.P. Lovecraft's The Call of Cthulhu (for beginning readers).

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scaurus Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
"Just one of the members who were there assembed
Could think of a thing that the thing there resembled,"

are lines worthy of Dr. Seuss himself :)
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Xombiegrinn Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I must agree with Rogue428. I will go out and HAVE kids just so I can read this to them.
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Joyeuse Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're doing a great job of redoing these, especially the text. This particular one had bothered me in its original form; this version is much better. And really, awesome work on the whole thing in its entirety. It's just spectacular.
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Rogue428 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is brilliant on a scale I can't even fathom. Please tell me you intend on publishing this.
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Mad-Geo Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
The fourth line seems a bit long. Consider:
Then with questions was Lagrasse beset.
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DrFaustusAU Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
Hey Geo,

Thanks for caring about this thing enough to offer constructive criticism.

The anapestic tetrameter scans something like this:

when leGRASSE had preSENTed a STONE statuETTE
then with QUESTions from EXperts leGRASSE was beSET

(This is complicated by the when/then rhyme at the start, I know)
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Mad-Geo Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Thanks for the reply. When you put it in meter like that I see how it works.
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