I think I agree with ~HailLovecraft, this page looks better than the new version. Overall, I like the revised version a lot better but this particular set just looks really good the way it is. I especially like how Cthulhu looks like he's underground with no one knowing, and as ~HailLovecraft said, page 21 looks brighter in this version. Great job on all of it though, I really enjoy reading this!
Earlier I was talking about the contrast between the 'first' pages and the 'revised' pages. This presents a perfect example. The page of Castro in the mental hospital is witty; the floor is blue and the night sky is blue with white stars, presenting a vivid contrast with the green straitjacket. On the other hand, the 'revised' page is smothered in the color green, and so the 'revised' page ends up being drab and dull to the point of being irritating. I enjoy the 'first' page and I would rather not look at the 'revised' page at all.
if this book dose not get published so that i can have a copy in my greedy little hands then there is something amiss within the world of publishing. it just keeps getting better and better !
This is brilliant! The styles are so well captured. As other people have already said, I would love to see a book published. It has certainly brightened up my morning!