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HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P42-43 by DrFaustusAU HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P42-43 by DrFaustusAU
H.P. Lovecraft's The Tomb (for beginning readers).

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kongregator-01 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
"had took hold" is improper grammar – "had taken hold" is proper, but breaks verse.

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"just what MAN-ner of MAD-ness took HOLD ov-er ME"

Your spy's right had has 6 fingers.
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junskee Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
not sure if you can still read this but the spy's alleged "6th" finger is the side of the palm. not a finger. and why the hell correct each page? can't enjoy it as it is? grammar nazi? peace! :D
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Omny87 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Shouldn't have hired Hitler to do your spying, buddy.
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Goodlyman100 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
i cant unsee it
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