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HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P34-35 by DrFaustusAU HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P34-35 by DrFaustusAU
H.P. Lovecraft's The Tomb (for beginning readers).

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kongregator-01 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
"which, JUST like my GROO-ming, seemed TOT-al-ly WRONG."
There's a forced beat after "which".

Suggestion: "and this, JUST like my GROO-ming seemed TOT-al-ly WRONG."
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Gryphon-Shifter Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student General Artist
His right hand looks REALLY weird...like an inflated surgical glove. Other than that it's looking good as usual, though! I love these!
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