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HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P16-17 by DrFaustusAU HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P16-17 by DrFaustusAU
H.P. Lovecraft's The Tomb (for beginning readers).

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TimTylor Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
Wow. That's a genuinely spooky picture.
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aemiliuslives Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Enjoying this so much :clap:
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Imperiused Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
This is working itself up to be something I'd be dying to have a hard copy of.
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Pupkim-Project Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Pan-Pan PAAAAAAAANNNNNNNN
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kongregator-01 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
"…the SAME prob-lems I'D had be-FORE."
"same" is usually not stressed, and "problems" is usually "PROB-lems". The verse feels off.

Suggestion:
"and FOUND the same PROB-lems
as I'D had be-FORE"
('as' or 'that' work)
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DrFaustusAU Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012   Traditional Artist
Whoops! Older version of text was pasted in error. I missed the wood in favour of the trees. Thanks for pointing it out!
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