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:icondrfaustusau:
H.P. Lovecraft's The Tomb (for beginning readers).

Pages 14 - 15.

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:icondigerman3:
no moar pages of this version of the Tomb ? : (
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:icondrfaustusau:
Sorry, no. You can continue the revised version from here: [link]
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:iconchaosfive55:
*chaosfive55 Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SOON!!!! SOOOOON!!!!!!!!! :eager:
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:icondragmackle:
never before have I seen such lyrical, mad, wonderful pieces. Please tell me you're willing to make these into actual books.
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:iconomnicron8000:
Good writing is good.
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:iconfantasticspastic93:
~FantasticSpastic93 Mar 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love this!
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:icontruewill:
*truewill Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I really, really like this. The "lightning" line seems to be a little off on meter when read aloud.
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:icondrfaustusau:
Hmm. I see what you're saying. I think it comes from the dropping of an unstressed syllable at the start of "The "BLASphemous PARTies...", which is not repeated on the second line. As a result some might read the line as iambic (that ONE night LIGHTning STRUCK...), rather than the intended anapestic "that one NIGHT lightning STRUCK..."
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:icontruewill:
*truewill Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Yep, that was what I was doing. It reads much better if I stress NIGHT. Thanks!
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