Very nice work! If I could just toss my two cents in though, I think it might work better without the nose; it looks odd for a fishmangod to have one. Just a thought that occurred to me.
Yeah, I know. I'm aiming for a more Herriman/Segar-esque vibe this time round (which seems less anachronistic). The noses on the two recent Dagon tests are in homage to Offissa Pupp. No prizes for figurin' who the Merchant Marine's pipe is in homage to.